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Rewrite the following passage, improving
the style by correcting the faulty punctuation, getting rid of
unnecessary passive verbs, improving the pronoun reference, removing
the dangling modifiers, and improving the parallel structure.
Stick to the language of the original. You may, however, shorten
the sentences, if you wish.
Considering all the evidence in the trial, it is clear that the verdict which was delivered
by the jury very quickly is very odd, many people are very angry about the proceedings,
which is increasing racial tensions in a city already very conscious of racial inequality in
jobs and housing and how blacks are discriminated against by city officials, especially
the police. It is all very alarming. After deciding the verdict, many TV programs
interviewed jurors, a person who watched these shows might find themselves getting
angry about the workings of the justice system and how so many of the jurors appeared
stupid misinformed biased or generally inadequate, moreover it is being claimed that
anti-Semitism in the black community is on the rise since the trial. The March on
Washington the so called million man march which was organized by the Nation of
Islam brought into the national spotlight Louis Farrakhan a person well known for his
extreme remarks against Jews, this has upset the Jewish community considerably and
Robert Shapiro the leader of the Simpson defence team as soon as the decision was
made by the jury indicated that he did not agree with the tactics of the defence and
sought to put a distance between himself and Johnnie Cochrane who had made the
summation for the defence. A person living in LA might seriously begin to worry
about the future of their community and beyond that how the racial question in the
entire country is being handled by politicians and the media.
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